The author of this topic makes an assertion that our life, including all important activities, is dominated by I.T. in today's world.
In this essay the pros and cons of modern technology will be discussed.
One one hand, there are mainly two important benefits of information technology. First of all, it is very much effective. In other words,
with the help of information technology we can manage our time cogently. If we want to buy some household things, which are very much important
in our daily life, we can do it with the help of online shopping. So, we do not have to spend any extra time to do this. For instance, according to
recent poll, 65% people prefer their grocery shopping from Amazon, which is an online shopping portal. Secondly, we can learn anything anywhere.
The simple meaning is we can use our leisure time as well with the help of technology. Moreover, we are not bounded in terms of activities. In other words,
if we want to learn cooking, with the help of technology we can learn it. For example, the research paper published by University of British Colombia
shows that there is a significant improvement of 56% leisure time activities in Canada by using internet. Thus, it is clear that there are some inevitable
advantages of technology.
On the other hand, there are certain disadvantages of technology. Mainly, the digital fraud is increasing day by day. Additionally, we can not recover our money, which is
stolen via internet so easily. For example, according to the US. Times, in 2019 , 20% more people logged a online cheating case as compare to last year. The second huge
disadvantage is some traditional aspects are being overlookd due to this rapid speed of technology. In other words, people are trying to be so modern that they are neglecting the
old and traditional values. For example, earlier, people used to read books but the recent trend is reading e-books. In addition, earlier people used to create paintings on canvas, but
modern people prefer to draw their painiting on their I-Pads. Hence, we are facing the consequences of I.T.
To conclude, it is clear that we are forgetting the practical touch of our tradition as well as our money is not secure anymore in this developed era. Although, these disadvantages
can be overcomed with little alertness. Furthermore, we can protect our money if we do our online activity carefully. But, we cannot deny the advantages, which we are getting from
modern technologies. We are now free to do anything and we can chase our dreams by our own. Thus, the benefits certainly outweigh the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 24.0651302605 220% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2188.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 442.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95022624434 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78104387147 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497737556561 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 687.6 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 4.76152304609 294% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 16.0721442886 180% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2533767491 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4482758621 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2413793103 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.37931034483 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180788893225 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050273613201 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526419538106 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0624901957059 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525864165048 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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