Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice.
Letter to your friend :
1.say why a driving licence is advantageous
2.recommend a driving license
3.give any extra guidance tips
Dear Annie,
Hi, how are you? hope you are in good health. I know it has been a while we met. I am happy that you are planning to learn driving. It is a good practical skill which would benefit us in many ways. I think it is the perfect time for you to learn driving as you already turned 18 years.
Let me tell you that having a driving license is important. For instance, if you know driving, then you can you use your vehicle for your daily commuting to college. In the case of any emergency driving skill helps a lot and you needn't depend upon others. In addition , driving license is an ID proof which you can use to give in the case of any government procedure.
I like to suggest you "King school" for learning driving. I learned driving from there only. They have efficient tutors and regular classes as well. The fees is also budget friendly. They will help you in submitting documents for attending driving test. They provide classes at your convenience.
One more thing that you should keep in mind is that to take both two-wheeler and four-wheeler driving test together that would be more easy. Besides that, do not go for any short-cuts to pass the driving test that would create big issues when you start real driving on the road .
All the best for your classes and hope to meet you soon.
Warm wishes,
Name
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| 2019-10-31 | amrutharanjith | 73 | view |
- Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice.Letter to your friend :1.say why a driving licence is advantageous2.recommend a driving license3.give any extra guidance tips 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hope
Dear Annie, Hi, how are you? hope you are in good health. I know it has b...
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Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to drive'.
Suggestion: to drive
...am happy that you are planning to learn driving. It is a good practical skill which wou...
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Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to drive'.
Suggestion: to drive
...it is the perfect time for you to learn driving as you already turned 18 years. Le...
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Line 9, column 230, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: needn't
...gency driving skill helps a lot and you neednt depend upon others. In addition , drivi...
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Line 9, column 268, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...u neednt depend upon others. In addition , driving license is an ID proof which y...
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Line 9, column 301, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ddition , driving license is an ID proof which you can use to give in the case of...
^^
Line 13, column 60, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to drive'.
Suggestion: to drive
...ou 'King school' for learning driving. I learned driving from there only. The...
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Line 13, column 79, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to drive'.
Suggestion: to drive
...l' for learning driving. I learned driving from there only. They have efficient tu...
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Line 13, column 170, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
... and regular classes as well. The fees is also budget friendly. They will help yo...
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Line 17, column 278, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... when you start real driving on the road . All the best for your classes and ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so, then, well, while, for instance, i think, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 244.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60245901639 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35537098775 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610655737705 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6804123711 158% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8667104844 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.15 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196353477677 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657070151914 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589268617016 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119411987652 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390816105828 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.51 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.