Nowadays, education has become integral of everyone's life because of competitive era. While the idea is that schools should provide entertainment facilities to entertain students but, rest of the people deem that the prime motive of school is giving education to pupils. Thus, I somewhat, agree with this statement and I will discuss my view points in upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, education plays a vital role in everyone's life. In another words, people get lucrative jobs in their furture owing to accurate education, and they get name and fame around the globe. For example, if someone wants to become a doctor, then will need to study medical students for having appropriate knowledge of this field. Furthermore, if schools do not provide facilities of education and they give more importance to entertainment, then youngsters will be diverted from their future dream. Apart from this, parents admit their children in education institutions to educate their kids. If school give more importance to leisure activities, then kid's parents will de dissatisfied from them. As a result, it give birth to conflicts between parents and school's teachers.
On the flip side, there are numerous reasons in the favor of this idea but the first and foremost is that teenagers need to take a break from study. In another words, these days, if students study for long hours, then youngsters will face numerous mental problems which are extremely harmful for their upcoming time, and they do not give proper intension towards their study. So, school had better to do something to entertain kids. Moreover, sometimes few teenagers have unique talents to wards other activities such as painting, cooking, game and so on in order to this, if schools give a chance to them for showing their talents, to oranginze these activities related programmes, then they will get a name and fame in their nation.
To sum up, although education plays a povital role in teenager's live but I believe that leisure activities also important to rejuvenate children's mind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'gives'?
Suggestion: gives
...dissatisfied from them. As a result, it give birth to conflicts between parents and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, thus, while, apart from, for example, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16167664671 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67653283794 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556886227545 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5744183353 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.933333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143560807694 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494657288455 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310482542857 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078349873011 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461585318689 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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