The flowchart illustrates the production of coloured plastic paper clips in a small factory.
Write a report for a university tutor describing the process
The chart analyzes the data about manufacture of colorful plastic paper clips in some factories.
First of all, there are 11 parts or sections and it begins with Molten plastic and finish with packing and despatch.
At a glance, there seems 3 moulds that are made of the molten plastic, such as red one, blue one and yellow one. While at the same time, all of them have to be quality controlled and machine-checked to be informed whether it is strong or not. Secondly, after adding unknown things to the material, it must be sorted by hand. Consequently, there created 2 color groups:...
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about manufacture of colorful plastic paper clips in some factories.
about the manufacture of colorful plastic paper clips in some factories.
it begins with Molten plastic and finish with packing and despatch.
it begins with Molten plastic and finishes with packing and despatch.
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Sentence Length SD: 5.356 7.5
No. of Words: 149 200
Minimum 150 words wanted
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 10
No. of Words: 149 200
No. of Characters: 676 1000
No. of Different Words: 97 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.5 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.507 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.454 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 46 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 30 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 16 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 8 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.75 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.356 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.875 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.388 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.584 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.081 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
6.0 . If i don't do any
6.0 . If i don't do any mistakes and write uper than 150 can i get 7.0 ?
Yes, you can re-write this
Yes, you can re-write this essay and let's see how is the performance.
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