You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter
• Explain why you have moved
• Describe the new house
• Invite your friend to come and visit
Dear John,
Hi there! I am fine and hope this letter finds you and your family in good health. Anyway, I am writing this letter to inform you that my address has been changed and my new house is as pretty as a picture. Allow me to elaborate.
Last month, my company promoted me as a sales manager, in the Sydney, from the designation of a sales person after seeing my backbreaking work for the organization. Due to this, relocation is necessitated for me and that’s why the old house has been left by me in the Melbourne. Fortunately, with The God’s Grace, I got a perfect residence for myself with a delighted garden, which has many kinds of flower, at the front door. Also, it is a one storey home that has 3 well decorated rooms, a modern kitchen and marvelous bathroom. In short, this habitation is very beautiful.
Finally, I would greatly appreciate that if you could come to my new charming house with your family for a small get together. Well, that’s all from my side.
Write back soon,
James Smith.
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Last month, my company promoted me as a sales manager, in the Sydney, from the designation of a sales person after seeing my backbreaking work for the organization.
Description: can you re-write this sentence?
which has many kinds of flower
which has many kinds of flowers
and marvelous bathroom
and marvelous bathrooms
for a small get together.
for a small gathering.
Sentence: Also, it is a one storey home that has 3 well decorated rooms, a modern kitchen and marvelous bathroom.
Error: storey Suggestion: story
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 13 10
No. of Words: 184 200
No. of Characters: 793 1000
No. of Different Words: 120 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.683 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.31 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.433 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 47 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 29 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 19 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 15 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.154 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.662 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.462 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.296 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.581 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.092 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4