In recent years, people love to live separate from their family, especially this trend is popular in metropolitan cities. In many developed countries masses live alone as compared to past time that have some consequences, but its benefits are more then its detrimental effects. This essay will tend to shed light on advantages of living alone in subsequent paragraphs.
To embark upon, by living far from a family, a person become self dependant. In family, he have not a responsibility of household chores, but by living alone he have to do cleaning, washing, cooking by himself that make him self dependant. Moreover, people become responsible for each and every work of them. For instance, family members do some work for them, so masses will always be dependent on others for minor works.
Furthermore, nowadays everyone like independency in their life. When people separate they do not face interference of their family members in their life. Masses be free to do everything on their own behalf. Moving further, current scenario belongs to technology that helps an individual to make their bonding strong with fsmily members by communicating on daily basis, so live far from family is beneficial from all side for an individual and society. To illustrate, a recent study depicts that the nation's have more self reliant residents in which citizens like to live in isolation.
In conclusion, I would like to opine that family is important as people love to live with them in past, but in competition world everyone should be self dependent, self reliant to get success in his own way.
- More people today prefer to live alone in comparison to the past Do you think it is a positive or negative development Give your opinion and relevant examples to support your view 81
- Should young people follow older people’s example or it’s good for them to challenge older people’s opinions and thoughts. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
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Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...consequences, but its benefits are more then its detrimental effects. This essay wil...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...on become self dependant. In family, he have not a responsibility of household chore...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...ousehold chores, but by living alone he have to do cleaning, washing, cooking by him...
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Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...eryone like independency in their life. When people separate they do not face interf...
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Line 7, column 96, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...ortant as people love to live with them in past, but in competition world everyone shou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04924242424 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7709233037 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564393939394 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8093754716 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.538461538 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130534048362 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493661435223 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301871403895 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0842370881009 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337640621609 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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