There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Music is considered to be one of those indispensable in human’s life. This essay will explain the reasons why music makes such an essential part. This essay will also discuss the importance of traditional and international music.
First and foremost, it is a well-known fact that music has a beneficial effect on one’s mental well-being. Study has showed that listening to music assists listeners in fighting off stress, as well as other mental illnesses. For example, in 2015 there was an experiment in which psychiatrists made use of classical songs to improve the condition of patients suffering from bipolar disease. The experiment was an astounding success. In addition, music enriches the inner space and broadens one’s horizon. More often than not, the lyric behind each song conveys a meaningful message, which can be either an advice or some words of encouragement.
Although there still exist heated debates concerning the role of traditional and international music, I am more inclined towards the idea that neither of them is of more importance than the other. From my point of view, both has its own advantage that should not be neglected. On the one hand, the traditional type plays a crucial part in the prosperity of one’s culture. Being handed down from generations to generations, it is not only a precious gift from our ancestors, but also our cultural identity that should be well-protected and treasured. At the same time, its modern counterpart helps to narrow the distance between country and country. Foreigners can enjoy the music while being exposed to new cultural values, without the fear of getting deterred by language barriers.
In conclusion, people need music for its undeniable perks in nurturing the soul. For these aforementioned reasons, I believe traditional and international music should co-exist to gain the most out of this wonderful creation of note and rhythm.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30844155844 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98927779752 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626623376623 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1837306082 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1764705882 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1176470588 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70588235294 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304304341602 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982963392792 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811213154982 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196170796588 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526276278655 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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