Do you agree or disagree? Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.
With the advent of technological devices, children are exposed to them at a greater level. Without even thinking of the ill-effects of such devices on their health, they waste their time and energy in such useless activities. hence, I concur with the idea that playing computer games is a waste of time.
Firstly, today’s kids never listen to their parents and as a result of this, they frequently sit in front of the computer playing games. they get addicted in a severe manner and find it difficult to come out of that addiction. concentration in other activities gets decreased and academic scores tend to decline. Mind is always filled with the thought of how to play well and get more points and hence they are always wasting valuable time thinking about the game and playing it.
Secondly, intense viewing of the computer screen and sitting for prolonged duration leads to ill-health which cannot be treated easily, thus resulting in everlasting ill effects on the body in the future life. Eyesight gets diminished at a faster rate. Also, poor posture results in the strain in the neck causing shoulder pain and back pain. Money needs to be spent to cure such ailments rand medications result in side effects which disturbs the overall functioning of the body.
Thirdly, student life becomes a nightmare with them turning violent and aggressive with a bad health condition. At a later stage in life, these kids tend to fair poorly in career due to lack of concentration and hence give rise to disputes at home and office, spoiling their life and future.
To put in a nutshell, playing computer games have serious adverse effects on the person and people surrounding them. it leads to disturbance of peace in the family and professional life. Had they not learnt the life lessons at a young age, they tend to falter in future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ons at a young age, they tend to falter in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91401273885 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57914008315 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592356687898 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.176916214 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4375 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206831090832 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682054858702 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943638738448 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115929894735 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781690796206 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.