Many parts of the world are losing important natural resources, such as forests, animals, or clean water. Choose one resource that is disappearing and explain why it needs to be saved. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion
Nowadays, unfortunatly some humans activities become destroying most natutal resources and one of the most valuable of those is, clean water.
By improving technology, and establishing too factories, clean water can be endanger and lose.I believe that water is the most important factor in our lives and it should be save. The following paragraphs will explain my some major reasons for this opinion. The first point I would like to make is that we can't live without water. As all of us know, we need some necessary factors to be alive; foods,oxygen and more. ,we need water for most of things in our lives and the most imprtant one is , drinking it and, also we use it for our other activities like, washing,foods and etc. In addition,our food making from animals or plants. animals should drinking water and also we use water for agriculture, thus we can understand if the water is pollute, all of the plants and animals become danger and certainly, we can't survive without food. Other point that I would like to make is that if water become completly pollute, all of the fish and totally, all of the sea creatures will destroyed. some days ago, I heard a news that, a large number of fishs dead because of the water pollution in the ocean and chemecical materials that exsisted in the water. therefore, in some of the countries because of gelobal warming,drought and some other reason,water became the most important problem in that countries, so we should't increase this worry by polluting water. I'm sure it`s clear from my analaysis that, life doesn`t have any meaning without water and it`s imposible to be alive without it. finally, I strongly believe that we should give more attention to the clear water and take care of it more than past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the things') or simply say ''most things''.
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...our food making from animals or plants. animals should drinking water and also we use w...
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...animals become danger and certainly, we cant survive without food. Other point that ...
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...that if water become completly pollute, all of the fish and totally, all of the sea creatu...
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...y pollute, all of the fish and totally, all of the sea creatures will destroyed. some days...
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Suggestion: Therefore
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, so, therefore, thus, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 302.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85430463576 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69397108438 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523178807947 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6453169782 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.769230769 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 5.5376344086 470% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150630283272 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586586755446 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395980218042 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117711209128 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215097998536 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.