You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there.
Ask them for help finding accommodation.
Tell them where you would like to live.
Tell them the type of place you are looking for.
Dear Mr. and Mrs. White,
I hope this letter find both of you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing to tell you about my promotion in your city London.
You will be happy to hear that I am promoted to next position of Senior Analyst in my bank The Royal Bank of Scotland in London branch. I was considered as strongest contestant for this role. As I am moving to your city, I would require accommodation from the next month and you are going to help me in finding that.
My office is in the South Hall area, any place near to this will be better for me to commute to and from my office. I will not have any personal convenience, so accommodation in my office vicinity would be preferred.
I am moving with my wife and your niece. So I would like to have an independent flat to live. It should be fully furnished as I am not taking any of home appliances along. I do not need parking, but the small kitchen garden would be appreciated as my wife loves to grow vegetables.
If you need any further details, call me at my number: 9501133847.
Hope to meet you soon.
With love,
Patrick Smith.
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| 2019-11-06 | Angrej Singh | 70 | view |
| 2019-11-06 | Angrej Singh | 70 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. and Mrs. White, I hope this letter find both of you in r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32075471698 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4944001006 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570754716981 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7975844618 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.0666666667 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1333333333 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.733333333333 4.34317383033 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200048107584 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685564059971 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050563760511 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100150401172 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590072482958 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.18 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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