Nowadays, it is increasingly more difficult to maintain the right balalcne between work and other aspects of one's life, such as leisure time with family memebers. How important do you think in this balance? why do people find it hard to achieve?
Recently, the phenomenon of the mass media including TV, radio, newspaper and its corresponding impacts have sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the significance of complex procedure is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and consequently positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that influences of social media can be a plus and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a general standpoint, impacts of watching television can provide the society with some noticeable effect which are rooted in the fact that crucial issues, as well as ultimate outcomes, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered current policies. Thus, the beneficial ramifications of both public teaching and electronic learning apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of a public arena, using broadcasting system might increase the consequences of lack of physical activity. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of creative processes is correlated negatiely with human behavior. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of essential part of human lives.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of development of technology far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantage of this unique phenomenon prove the total outcomes but also pinpoint the thorny issues' potential implications.
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- Violence portrayed on TV and in the movies leads to an increase in crime in our society. People who watch violent movies are more likely to become criminals. Do you agree or disagree? 85
- The advanced medical technology expands human’s life. Do you think it is a curse or blessing? 88
- do you agree with Getting married before finishing studies 88
- Some people think that cars should be banned from large cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 77
- Some say that music is as important as other subjects in schools to promote learning in children life. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion. 85
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, consequently, hence, if, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 245.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.67346938776 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20041646603 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.697959183673 0.580463131201 120% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5505743812 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.363636364 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2727272727 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.050569323567 0.242375264174 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0161794445031 0.0925447433944 17% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0202068230333 0.071462118173 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0281040122283 0.151781067708 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132769027517 0.0609392437508 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 12.6369458128 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 11.5310837438 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.56 8.32886699507 139% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 55.0591133005 193% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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