In new area People have different responsibilities in their societies towards each others in order to live together peacefully.So, some people believe that corporation in the crucial responsibility for human being to support well0being of societies and their environments, while the others believe that, the only reason for corporation among people is just eBaying the law in order to earring more money for the society and individuals. From my point of view corporaartion is one of the most significant duties of each person in society to support both societies and environment interests.
As matter of fact, human survival have been rooted in people's living as a society since the first human have been burned. So, as a society member each individual have specific responsibility that should be done by that specific person and these unwritten duties will not effective , if there would not any corporation among every members of that society. Cooperation will help people to take the benefit of everyone's idea in order to figure out the best possible solution for problems and in some cases this collaborating would have positive impacts on environment as well, such as people collaborating as an environmentalist to protect nature against wild fire or deforestation, that frankly will not happen without cooperation.
on the contrary, some people claim that the only reason for cooperation among people is to operating the law in order to provide the best outcome at work please, boost up productivity and as a result make more money by the practitioners. I personally believe that due to human nature of being socialized, corporation is the most effective and crucial factor that should be consider by every people to have better society and environment.
To sum up, there are two different view towards the corporation, some people believe it is necessary for human being and their environment as it has been done from decades ago, others think it is crucial only to provide better outcome at work place under the guise of law and as a result more money will earn for by the society.Yet, I strongly believe not only would corporation be an crucial factor of survival of every societies, it can also promote environment swell due to people's feeling responsible towards their surroundings.
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- Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, frankly, if, so, well, while, such as, as a result, in some cases, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 374.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16042780749 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01485979036 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459893048128 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 625.5 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 23.0359550562 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.392757781 60.3974514979 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 241.25 118.986275619 203% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.75 23.4991977007 199% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.25 5.21951772744 254% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358390914872 0.243740707755 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157845684729 0.0831039109588 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830550211712 0.0758088955206 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241006564487 0.150359130593 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511753351119 0.0667264976115 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.2 14.1392134831 185% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 16.33 48.8420337079 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 12.1743820225 184% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.54 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 11.2143820225 182% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.7820224719 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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