Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing with regard to your article about Karaj city in the last issue of your magazine. Unfortunately I observed some incorrect information which is beneficial to become informed about.
The article about Karaj city, the capital of Alborz province in Iran, was really informative to me, especially the part concerned with its political importance. However, the Morvarid castle was mentioned as the only historical building of this city, while the other tourist attractions like Karevansara Shahabbasi and Hammam Mesbah were ignored.
Your magazine is reputed as one of valuable sources of information in tourism sector worldwide and I have been following you for several years. But, spreading incorrect essays may change its image among your fans and destroy your reputation as well.
As a loyal reader of your magazine, I suggest your editor team to organize another article specifically related to historical places of Karaj city. Writing this essay would not only rectify the previous one, but also benefits your database as there is little information about this area elsewhere.
I hope you would consider the importance of this matter to our city
Yours sincerely
Nancy White
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, really, so, well, while, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34196891192 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70756003921 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673575129534 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.41237113402 127% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.2460823587 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.555555556 76.5299724578 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 4.34317383033 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313197879723 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131719371755 0.0766984524023 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677624621262 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16591769476 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0987951090527 0.0580467560999 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 8.37731958763 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 70.7449484536 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 8.71597938144 157% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 7.59969072165 127% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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