International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment.
Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
it is important to consider how tourism effect the society in today's life. While some people believe that the increasing number of foreigner tourists may have more disadvantages than its known benefits, In my opinion, tourism have several advantages that outweigh any damages.
On the one hand, those who believe high tourism rate is harmful might argue that it can disturb the locals' balance in their community on environmental and social aspects. To explain, firstly, if the number of international tourists is with higher capacity than what a city can handle, street crowd and congestion are the consequances of such phenomenan. This may also result in higher pollution rate and possible damage in natural resources. For example, Paris in the summer season is usually over crowded with visitors that leads to oblirate the natural beauty of the city view, thus annoying local citizins.
On the other hand, I believe that the economic and social benefits of tourism make the advantages of such phenomenan overweigh its harm. To explain, when the tourism rate increases, it means that buying national products and services will consequantly encrease. Museum tickets and restuarants income, for instance, are highly nourished by tourism. Additionally, this can lead to more job opportunities among local workers, for example, taxi-drivers and tour guides, which is a significant economical benefit to be considered. Furthermore, the social benefits of international tourists can increase the interaction between locals and different cultures which result in more opened and flexible community.
In conclusion, Although some people argue that international tourism has more harm on society because of its over crowding and culture contrasts, I believe that the economical and social benefits of such phenomenon is way more than its disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53684210526 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92890205037 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571929824561 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4471670827 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.5 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210562656734 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771470653949 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386972355648 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132817291865 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336279273926 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.