Education is the most important aspect in Human's life. Personally, I believe it is essential for a human to be educated
to survive in this world. I feel this way for two main reasons, which i will explore in the following essay.
First of all, Everybody needs a job to survive in this world. In this case, they have to learn how to prepare for their
careers and responsibilities. They may attend some university to augment their capabilities and skills pertaining to their
interest. To illustrate, for someone who is interested in studying software engineering, that person has to learn skills
that are essential for programming a program. He/she might attend a college or a university to learn those skills, Or
might attend a online program offered by the university. After learning, the person is ready for the job, and will be
capable enough to take companies responsibilities.
Second, some people might not want to prepare themselves for career, but want to expand their existing knowledge. Hence,
they will attend a Master's or a PhD program offered by the college or university. For example, my brother decided to
his further studies in USA in order to expand his existing knowledge about his subject interest.
In conclusion, I am opinion of that people should pursue studies in university to get a better life ahead. This is because
without having sufficient knowledge about the subject, the person wont get a job, consequently will lead to a rough life.
- People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?“Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today's world." Use reasons and details to support your opinion. 68
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use printed material such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
- To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In deve 50
- It is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing 58
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, if, may, second, so, as to, for example, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 246.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05691056911 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91126166989 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540650406504 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2215180604 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.8571428571 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.53405017921 287% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206065862353 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678306644575 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440290862597 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0729537508335 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563948088371 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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