You have invited some friends to come on holiday. You are going to airport to meet them. They have asked you how to get to your house from airport
Write a letter to your friends,
In your letter
-Explain that you will meet them at the airport
-Give them some idea of what you have planned for them
-tell them some important things that they might find useful.
Dear Sam,
How are you Sam? How are you doing? As per our previous conversation you said you are going to visit me and my city for the holiday in the 2nd week of August.
You are coming o Leeds for the first time. You and your family is new to the united Kingdom. I will come to pick you up from the Manchester Airport. Please inform me about the arrival time of your flight, I will plan out accordingly. This is your first visit to United Kingdom, I have planned that you all will stay with me for the 3 days till that time my wife will show you and your family nearby area and after that in the weekend we will go to London and I have done the train booking and hotel booking for our stay. I have done the booking for all the major attractions like London Eye, Madam Tussad’s and boat ride to see the London bridge and surrounding view at night.
Here it is summer but you and your family is not very used to breezy cold weather of united kingdom, so I will suggest you to buy a good pair of jackets and pullovers. Intermittent showers are specialty of U.k weather so come prepared with the shower resistant jackets as well. Please inform me your flight details as soon as it gets confirmed and gate number for your arrival at Manchester Airport.
Looking forward to see you all and all the fun that we will have together. If any doubt do write me or give me a ring.
Yours Lovingly
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flaws:
More compound or complex sentences wanted. Most of sentences are simple sentences:
You are coming o Leeds for the first time. You and your family is new to the united Kingdom. I will come to pick you up from the Manchester Airport. Please inform me about the arrival time of your flight, I will plan out accordingly. This is your first visit to United Kingdom, I have planned that you all will stay with me for the 3 days till that time my wife will show you and your family nearby area and after that in the weekend we will go to London and I have done the train booking and hotel booking for our stay. I have done the booking for all the major attractions like London Eye, Madam Tussad’s and boat ride to see the London bridge and surrounding view at night.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 10
No. of Words: 269 200
No. of Characters: 1096 1000
No. of Different Words: 143 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.05 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.074 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.106 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 61 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 38 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 16 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 11 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.812 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 14.156 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.375 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.333 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.635 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.27 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 4