You have stayed at a friend’s house last weekend and lost your watch. Write a letter to your friend and say
– Thank him/her for a good time you had.
– Describe your watch.
– What would you like him/her to do with it?
Dear Amit,
I hope this letter finds you in the best of your health, happiness, and spirits. I am writing this letter to thank you for giving me a huge party. I enjoyed a lot while staying with you last weekend. When I got back home, I completely rejuvenated and refreshed because all the arrangements were extremely good.
I would like to mention one thing more that I lost my watch during the stay at your home. Let me tell you in detail about my watch. This watch is very precious for me because it was gifted by my parents on my last birthday. It was a metallic color with a black strip on it and made by Titan Company.
When you find my watch, please keep it with you. If possible then please courier it to me or I will be coming next month to get my watch. At last, once again thanks for hosting such a nice party and convey my regards to your parents.
I hope to meet you next month.
Your friend
Jai
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o thank you for giving me a huge party. I enjoyed a lot while staying with you la...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28813559322 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19420074316 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64406779661 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9036804851 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.3846153846 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6153846154 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.15384615385 4.34317383033 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3644078929 0.216113520407 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137556548695 0.0766984524023 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783712139019 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197085999008 0.12726935374 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605385437644 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.01 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.51 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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