Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people.
Identify the possible causes of this trend, and propose some solutions you think would be effective.
Throughout the latest years the rate of crime amongst teenagers has been noticeably increased. This essay will discuss why young people are tempted to commit crimes and will give some possible solutions.
Probably one major factor contributes to this trend is the absence of purpose in adolescents’ lives. To illustrate, after finishing school or during summer vacations, adolescents may have no useful activities to do, which seems to be a good medium for crimes as a way of filling this empty life. Another possible reason is the movies that introduce criminals as people who have great power, money or fame. These movies can motivate young adults, who are unlikely to interpret these ideas, to act like those criminals. For instance, a prominent Egyptian actor has been accused, in the past years, of promoting crime in his movies, which, as many people believe, acts as motive for teenagers to commit crimes.
Turning to the possible solutions, firstly, parents have a great responsibility of giving more attention and support to their young men. While adolescents are being raised in a loving, supportive environment, they will have no temptation to commit crimes. Another remedy could be increasing the worthy activities that promote cooperation and mutual respect among students during school time. Finally, the government may have a role in eliminating teenagers’ crimes by establishing sports competitions or building youth centers that provide guidance to young adults.
In conclusion, many teenagers these days are more likely to be criminals due to the meaningless life many may live and the violence they watch on screens. However, a coordinated response by families, schools and states can solve this critical issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 102, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much may', 'a good deal of may'.
Suggestion: much may; a good deal of may
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40875912409 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87815318981 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627737226277 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0483471086 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157961536748 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541696481441 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308560414158 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974858616808 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265028224544 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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