You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope.
Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter:
explain why you are writing
express concern about the missing card
ask them what they intend to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apprise you about the envelope that I received on the 17th of January did not consist a credit card enclosed in it.
Regarding the envelope, it was properly airtight when I received it. However, when I uncluttered the envelope, card was omitted. I suspect that the employee forgotten to park the card inside. Anyhow, I have enrolled the complain to your bank help center and have demanded to block the card as earliest.
Furthermore, I had money of 5000$ in my account which associate with this credit card, that I have already transferred to my saving account.
Now, I appeal you to double-check my request and endorsed it if it is still in process. Along with that, please expedite the reissuance process for my card and affirm me the date so I will gather from your bank by myself to evade the currier time.
I look forward to getting the issue resolved at the earliest.
Yours Faithfully,
Muhammad Musa
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...he card inside. Anyhow, I have enrolled the complain to your bank help center and have deman...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 29, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$5000'.
Suggestion: $5000
...arliest. Furthermore, I had money of 5000$ in my account which associate with this...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, regarding, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 791.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73652694611 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61925230315 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652694610778 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1151991566 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276597467044 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933455572052 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551233098657 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114887060452 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834635274538 0.0580467560999 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.