The given table shows the details of participation by Scottish adults in various cultural activities over the year, according to different ages.
Overall, it is readily apparent that, age of an individual played important role for participating in any kind of cultural activities.
To begin with, 16 to 24 years aged people participated in any activity with 35%, whereas, this figure decreased for other age groups such as, 25 to 44 and 45 to 74 (22% and 17% respectively). Further, 22% people with age of 45 to 74 were interested to take part in crafting, similarly, same group had greater percentage of participation in category of cultural purchases, (18%) as compared to other age groups.
In addition, 30% Scottish adults preferred visual arts to take part in, that was two times higher than average percentage of people with age group of 16 and over. While, 17% individuals were participated in writing activity, merely 5 to 6% people participated in this from other age groups. Moreover, computer-based activities were less preferred among people of all ages, during whole year.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, similarly, whereas, while, in addition, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12921348315 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99842676419 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634831460674 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3963442883 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.428571429 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4285714286 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1428571429 5.23603664747 232% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22224051292 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115668400239 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09029783147 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157373867625 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0971143213883 0.0819641961636 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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