Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To that extent do you agree or disagree.
With the increasing number of people traveling outside the country to either work or study, language barrier has become a major communication challenge. Hence, it is often thought by many individuals, that living with foreigners in a country can cause social and practical issues. However, I completely agree with this viewpoint.
It is certainly true that language barrier is one major social problem many people encounter, when they move to a foreign country. Once a person is unable to communicate with the citizens of a country appropriately, they tend to have limited ideas about the cultural diversities of the country and as a result, they may fail to adhere to the rules and regulations govering that society. In addition, an individual can feel sad or frustrated for not being able to understand and express simple ideas. This usually lead to a feeling of unwillingness to socialize and as a consequence, loneliness becomes inevitable.
In respect of practical problems, a significant challenge would be in aspect of unemployment. Many immigrants are unable to get well-paid jobs due to the fact that they have limited knowledge of their language. Hence, a good number of them resolve to accepting minial jobs such as security guards. Furthermore, education is another crucial area that can be affected by language barrier.
For instance, a student studying in a French speaking country may have difficulties taking lecture note if they do not understand what is being said, thus resulting in low acedamic performances.
In conclusion, i strongly believe that language barrier is the major cause of both social and practical problems people tend to encounter in a foreign country which usually result in unemployment, violation of rules and regulations, and poor acedamic performances.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33566433566 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07558179602 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573426573427 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2845161075 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.384615385 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251502934761 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815383999923 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626927252285 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135041394559 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381856249725 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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