With the rise of E-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people sees this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.
Advanced technology replacing conventional way of doing things such as communication, transportation and so on. Contradiction have been witnessed among some group about increasing use of electronics books instead of regular paper books. While this offers a few merits, there are some demerits which are worth considering.
There are two main benefits of using electronic books. Firstly, Using a soft copy of any book saves many trees from which paper books are made. It helps to prevent deforestation which has major impact on global warming.Trees plays significant role to produce oxygen for living and it also observe s carbon dioxide. as a result, everyone on planet have fresh air to breath while reading books from electronic gadget. Furthermore, books are more compatible with electronics device are easy to carry. sometimes it is difficult for a person to keep a book while travelling. Therefore, it gives a suitable option for readers to fulfill their hobby by reading through their electronic instruments.
On the other hand, Various demerits may be noted. In the first place, Reading for long time through electronic instruments can have detrimental effects on body parts such as eyes and heart. Screen of devices releases much amount of rays that can be harmful. For Instance, it is difficult for eyes to bear ultraviolet rays extracted from screens. Therefore, a person who prefers to read more often might end up having a blurred vision eventually. Furthermore, fraud authentication of some valuable books can lead to piracy. By purchasing original version by one and sharing with many others can lead to easy access for some valuable content making worthless for author.
In conclusion, If people starts using electronic books, they can contribute themselves to save environment by stopping deforestation and moreover it is easy to carry as well. However, excess use of such device can harm different body parts such as eyes and heart. Therefore, it is necessary to weigh the benefits against the drawbacks carefully before coming to decision as to whether use a book in a soft copy or a hard copy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22157434402 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90576817424 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6063860549 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.55 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.15 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146172165536 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456522666206 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416087721625 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952852902907 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047452197796 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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