There is no giansaying that societies and people have experinced large number atecedents during the time. There changes has resulted to profound changes societies. From my perspective, there is no doubt that job market has been effected and new moder job market has least similarities with the past ones. The ensuing paragraphs will elaborte my points of view.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that technological progress and develoments that are being occured changed the job market demands. Take typist as an example, in my courty some people typed people's letter, since most of the people were illitrate and they were not able to write eaither their pesonal letters or official application. However, these days almost the whole population of my country are able to write. In the past, most parents encouraged thier children specially their sons to learn litracy for having a prosperous future while these days there is no guarentee that present jobs will be exsited or ragraded as high as status these days.
The second point comes to my mind is that people should not choose their future jobs easily, since some professions and jobs may be extisted in next years. For instance, When i was a child, there is no job as data scientist. Therefore, I could not choose or even think about this job, but I am a data scientist nowadays and I enjoy my job. Hence, poeple are not able what type of career in future will provide better opportunity for them.
Last but not least, in the past there was a short gap time from people pondered over their favorite job until they were ready for doing their jobs. In other words, peoples' interests and thought were not changed profoundly, but these days, people spend more time during the stage they want to think about their future jobs and when they will find theri jobs. In this respect, people should spend plentiful time for education and their interests might be chaned until they want to choose their jobs. a
In conclusion, contemplating all aforementiond pragraphs, finding a save and prosperous job is too complicated specially world which is changing
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 263, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the least'.
Suggestion: has the least
... been effected and new moder job market has least similarities with the past ones. The en...
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Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e to write eaither their pesonal letters or official application. However, these ...
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Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...isted in next years. For instance, When i was a child, there is no job as data sc...
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Line 7, column 499, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: A
...d until they want to choose their jobs. a In conclusion, contemplating all afo...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...il they want to choose their jobs. a In conclusion, contemplating all aforement...
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Line 9, column 145, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...icated specially world which is changing
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1767.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93575418994 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49821414945 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54469273743 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.913953748 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.4375 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0869701564721 0.236089414692 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0331565587939 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316065839648 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0520186187308 0.150856017488 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02672997704 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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