Life circle of frog

Essay topics:

Life circle of frog

The diagram shows the many stages of revolution during the life cycle of a frog.

Generally, the development of a frog includes 7 steps, beginning life as a fertilized egg and ending with the form of an adult frog.

The cycle begins with mating of frogs and lays a large number of eggs into the water. They develop to become the embryos and soon hatch into tadpoles in the next step. When small tadpoles emerge, they look more like the fish than the frog and they do not have any legs. Over time, these tadpoles grow bigger and start to form their limbs.

The fifth stage is the elaboration into young frogs of the tadpoles. Although their tails still exist, they are shorter than before and the limbs have grown significantly. In the next period, the young frog becomes larger in size, its tail disappears and its limbs are fully developed. The frogs then leave the water and continues to grow in size. In the final stage, the mature frog is fully developed and is ready to mate. The cycle then repeats itself.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...le begins with mating of frogs and lays a large number of eggs into the water. They develop to be...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 216, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: larger
...the next period, the young frog becomes larger in size, its tail disappears and its limbs are ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, still, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57923497268 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17250057002 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584699453552 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.4867885166 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.8333333333 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.08333333333 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255506306232 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963937126723 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904485758816 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19111444676 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797377728498 0.0819641961636 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.2329268293 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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