As parents, you are always concern with your children's life path. In my opinion, nowadays, parents are even more involved in their children's education than ever before for three main reasons; they are more educated themselves, the value of education these days, and the distraction along children's way.
First and most important reason relates to the level of education of parents themselves. By comparison, more people are educated today than they were in the past an as a result they expect their children to be educated even more than them. Consider a family in which one parent, either mother or father, is not educated enough. In such family the low level of education in children would not be the most important issue, however, in a pretty educated family the situation can turn upside down. So parents oblige themselves to pay more attention to their children's education.
Secondly, the importance of education is growing rapidly. Before hand, most of the jobs were related to the physical power of the employees since most of the jobs relates either to the agriculture or industry. However, nowadays most of the employers are looking for well educated and hard working people to exploit. As s result, children's education has a direct relation to their future success and parents are aware of that.
Finally, these days there are lots of distractions for children out there, distraction like various types of video games or social media. Although, children may not be aware of the amount of time they spent for example in social media, their parents who had not experience such distractions as a child, would know for sure what potentials are going to waste due to the expansion of these distractions. That is why they involve themselves more to their children's education.
To sum up, I believe parents are more involving themselves in their children's education today than before for a few reasons. being more educated themselves, growing importance of education, and distraction are the reasons I hold for my opinion.
- TPO 27- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying. 3
- TPO 54. The Salton Sea in California is actually a salty inland lake. The level of salt in the lake's water—what scientists call its salinity—has been increasing steadily for years because the lake's water is evaporating faster than it is be 80
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- TPO 40 - Some parents offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school.Do you think this is a good idea?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: BEFORE_HAND[1]
Message: Did you mean 'beforehand'?
Suggestion: Beforehand
...rtance of education is growing rapidly. Before hand, most of the jobs were related to the p...
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Line 7, column 263, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'experienced'.
Suggestion: experienced
...social media, their parents who had not experience such distractions as a child, would kno...
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Line 9, column 126, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Being
...on today than before for a few reasons. being more educated themselves, growing impor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08358208955 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6730105724 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501492537313 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5617748572 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.4375 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234224562297 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964016971777 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773320826046 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156467933617 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686606514082 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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