A large number of deaths are caused by road accidents.Why do so many road accidents accour? Make recommendations that would help to reduce the number of road accidents.

Sadly, death toll is intensifying on roads with an each passing day. This phenomenon is more prevalent in less affluent countries. The upcoming paragraphs will shed light on reasons before embarking on possible solutions.

To commence with, a number of causative factors responsible for the accidents of people. The root cause is unbridled population growth. As people buy more and more vehicles, it leads to traffic congestion on roads. Obviously, ever - increasing number of automobiles tend to high risk of road accidents. Secondly, reason that can be associated with it is conditions of roads. Majority of roads have dilapilated condition and offer lack of road signs, in this situation, roads tend to become death traps. Furthermore, another reasonable fact which cannot be overlooked is lax attitude of people. Many a people often throw traffic rules out of the window, in this way, they do not only endanger their life, but others also.

A handful of possible solutions are there to extenuate this problematic situation. Primarily, there is a pressing need for government to control the population growth in order to ameliorate this issue. Moreover, it is high time, government upgraded public transport to discourage people from using private vehicles. Similarly, enacting stringent laws for road safety is the need of the hour. Sooner regimes make firm legislations, better it is, alongwith this government had better incorporate road safety subjects in school curriculum to make aware the students and children about traffic safety instructions.

In encapsulation, the aforementioned information would have explained that what are the solutions to tackle the problems of increasing number of deaths on road owing to accidents.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...o high risk of road accidents. Secondly, reason that can be associated with it is...
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Suggestion: as well
...ot only endanger their life, but others also. A handful of possible solutions are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46666666667 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98035305345 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637037037037 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1837315108 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279740067925 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722151919849 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858240006438 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168910800411 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887058748325 0.056905535591 156% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.85 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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