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when applying for a job many times employer asks some personal information about relationship status and persons hobbies and interests. some think this back round check is not necessarye some disagree.
when applying for a job you will be asked for information about yourself. they want to have a clear picture about the person they employ. Your hobbyes and interests will give a glue about the fitting in the future position.
For the people who are energetic and acctive in socialworld find that this information is useful for determin ther successful application. information about relationship status will give data about wich shiffts will fit to different persons. Day shiffts suit for familyes. Couples who are marryed and have a children tend to have less flexible timescheduals. As they have more responsebileteis, like thking children to school and prepairing food for them.
As far a single relasionships are concerned they have more time to focus to hobbyes and othes subjects the are interested in. For examle I am in open relasionship with no childre. Last friday my boss asked me if i could help him out wih extra shift. I have no proble to shuffle around my schdual as i dont have so many responsibilyety.
But there are people who thin that additional information is relevante. Our personal information should not for shering with others.
To summerise employes interest for personal information I think it will help you to lock the position what you are after. As i it gives a better match between position and person
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
when applying for a job many times employer ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'times'' or 'time's'?
Suggestion: times'; time's
when applying for a job many times employer asks some personal information...
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Suggestion: Some
...atus and persons hobbies and interests. some think this back round check is not nece...
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...eck is not necessarye some disagree. when applying for a job you will be asked fo...
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Suggestion: They
...e asked for information about yourself. they want to have a clear picture about the ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...out the fitting in the future position. For the people who are energetic and acc...
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Suggestion: Information
...r determin ther successful application. information about relationship status will give dat...
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... Day shiffts suit for familyes. Couples who are marryed and have a children tend to hav...
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Line 5, column 307, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
...ilyes. Couples who are marryed and have a children tend to have less flexible timeschedual...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... to focus to hobbyes and othes subjects the are interested in. For examle I am in open ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...hildre. Last friday my boss asked me if i could help him out wih extra shift. I h...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...roble to shuffle around my schdual as i dont have so many responsibilyety. But th...
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Suggestion:
...ion should not for shering with others. To summerise employes interest for perso...
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Message: The pronoun 'i' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
...he position what you are after. As i it gives a better match between position and per...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ter match between position and person
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05859375 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92073632559 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578125 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4316534062 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.9444444444 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2222222222 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.11111111111 7.06120827912 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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