You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about weather to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
say why he/she would not enjoy going to collage
explain way getting a job is a good idea for him/her
suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear John,
you wrote me about your confueson wether to find a job or continue with studyes.
As we know each other alomest a decade i can give you point of view. From our early schooldays together i notest you waren't as intersted as i had in school studyes. therefore I am sure you wont enjoy cillege.
Instead of college you should focus more about things what really interest you. In the same way like I, you have a great passion in cars, therefore i suggest to work with me. I just opened my own workshop and you have all skill what I am looking for. I have different positions available. At first you wold start as panel beather. After you have mastered that you can move to spray painting area. but the final position need a person who i really trust. It takes few years to reach there but i promise, if you learn all the basics you will be sitting in the office next to me.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, you wrote me about your confueson wether...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...find a job or continue with studyes. As we know each other alomest a decade i c...
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Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... As we know each other alomest a decade i can give you point of view. From our ea...
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Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...her i notest you warent as intersted as i had in school studyes. therefore I am s...
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Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...s intersted as i had in school studyes. therefore I am sure you wont enjoy cillege. In...
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Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: therefore,
...s intersted as i had in school studyes. therefore I am sure you wont enjoy cillege. In...
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Line 7, column 149, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...have a great passion in cars, therefore i suggest to work with me. I just opened ...
^
Line 7, column 332, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... first you wold start as panel beather. After you have mastered that you can move to ...
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Line 7, column 398, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...at you can move to spray painting area. but the final position need a person who i ...
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Line 7, column 493, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
.... It takes few years to reach there but i promise, if you learn all the basics yo...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, really, so, therefore, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 722.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29761904762 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19767837716 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.696428571429 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.8343120613 44.8134815571 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.1666666667 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17042995243 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642150027944 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393784569901 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117066184185 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169196063474 0.0580467560999 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.