Forecast increase in world oil production
Given is the graph presenting the growth of oil production in million barrels. This presentation is retrieved from several countries.
As it can be seen, OPEC Middle-East countries will dramatically reach the amount of oil production. However, this trend for the production of non OPEC and other OPEC countries will experience a significant decline over the period of time.
In comparison to the figure for non-OPEC countries in 1980 and 2000, this stood at 11 million barrels in world oil production in a ten-year period. The changes occurred after a short peak in 2000-2010 with eighteen million barrels. The oil production in non-OPEC countries is predicted to decline slightly in 2020.
Granted, if we can see the graph of the other OPEC countries, this will show reserve, with gradual rebound to 17 million barrels. Interestingly, 2000-10 saw a starting point, with 13 million barrels in world oil production. This is the end of the report.
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the rise of oil production in world
the rise of oil production in the world
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