Dear Sir / Madam
I am writing this letter to extend my thanks to you for the wonderful trip that you arranged for us.
Of late, I have traveled to the state of Goa and some of the picturesque places in that particular state. I have booked a guided tour package on your website. To embark upon, I would like to appreciate your personal guide. He was never reluctant to help us. Moreover, he went the extra mile in dire situations. With the help of the guide, we had been to a plethora of natural beauties such as Bhaga beach, Dood Sagar and so on. My family instantly liked those beaches and refreshing waterfalls. In fact, we fell in love with the stunningly beautiful places. In addition to that, The Airbnb, that you provided was outstanding as it accommodated morning complimentary breakfast and dinner.
Having said that, there are quite a few things which disappointed us. Firstly, there was a power outage frequently. Although we didn't stay most of the time during our vacation in the room, we felt exasperated at times. Secondly, there was a discrepancy in the prices that were mention in both online and offline. I would suggest you rectify it.
If you have anything to discuss please don't hesitate to reply to this email.
Yours faithfully,
Rakesh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 50, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...I have traveled to the state of Goa and some of the picturesque places in that particular s...
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Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... a power outage frequently. Although we didnt stay most of the time during our vacati...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ine. I would suggest you rectify it. If you have anything to discuss please don...
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Line 9, column 40, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... If you have anything to discuss please dont hesitate to reply to this email. Yo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in addition, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6627027383 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672727272727 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6310915328 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.1176470588 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9411764706 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76470588235 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250844543144 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676866023751 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591459176708 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136185949211 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416805536901 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.67 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.