The concept of individual responsibility is a necessary fiction. Although, society must hold individuals accountable for their own actions, people’s behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
Individual behavior gets its form by the action and interaction of several environmental, societal and individual forces which interplay with each other giving the direction to choose. In general, what a person do is equally governed by the society as that of his own intellect, so blaming sole individual for the bad deeds or commending him only during the laudable situation is somehow illogical. I agree to some extent with the prompt given that the people’s behavior is not only governed by his/her own making but still I am not totally non consonant with the opposing view.
First, it can be simply observed in our society only that what we are now and what have we achieved till now is largely governed by the society in which we reside. I still remember my friend, John, who used to live as a slum as he had no house to live, and his behavior was noticeably different than that of other friends in my classroom. All the ignoble actions that he used to perform were not because of his own making or habit but because he was grown up with that only. As soon as they won the lottery they shifted to the colony where we are living in and now he has been totally different, which makes a case for the role of societal and environmental forces for shaping the people’s behavior.
Second, there is no such thing that we can individually acquire; we all have gained the common understanding of the social issues--though the degree of understanding may differ-- and move further according to the rigid plans of the society. But, there are some issues which attack the cherished beliefs like robbery, theft, rape etc. which are skyrocketing nowadays, especially by the actions of some dissolute people who perform these lecherous acts. These issues can be partly considered by the ill-will of the individual and not totally governed by the forces of the societies solely.
There are several issues that occur in our society leading to some great achievement as well as even deleterious effects. In this regard, we should not completely blame the individual as a whole, but it also has some limitations in case of serious heinous crimes which are out of the normative lifestyle that build upon the deeds of the individual making. Nevertheless, in most of the cases, as society is responsible for shaping the behavior of the individual, society should take a responsibility for the act of the individual members, not only blaming solely on the individual.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...d his behavior was noticeably different than that of other friends in my classroom. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, still, well, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2048.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 422.0 442.535393258 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85308056872 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7926035079 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504739336493 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 658.8 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.0739756519 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.285714286 118.986275619 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1428571429 23.4991977007 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224296770135 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761228144007 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536208213021 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139962429724 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528781041691 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 48.8420337079 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.