Many people try to balance work and other parts of their life. However, this is very difficult to do. What are the problems associated with this? What is the best way to achieve a better balance?
Work-life balance is something that most people aim for, but it is indeed a massive undertaking. As it is by no means an easy task, many people fail to achieve it. In this essay, I will outline several reasons behind this situation and suggest several possible ways to help people strike a balance between work and life.
There are a variety of causes of the failure to achieve work-life balance. Firstly, in the light of fiercer competition among companies, many workers are forced to work extra hours to maximize profits, which may cause them to struggle to spend time on recreational activities. Furthermore, many workers, in fact, are willing to handle the heavier workloads to make more money. Finally, we currently live in a materialistic society where the priorities of many people are cash, possessions, and status. Thus, to reach these goals, people often participate in the pursuit of wealth, and so they spend most of their time working instead of on other aspects of their lives.
However, several measures could be implemented to mitigate work-life imbalance. One possible solution is that enterprises should extend holiday entitlement to enable their staff to alleviate stress. By going on holiday, workers could escape from the hectic pace of urban life, rejuvenate themselves, and be ready to go back to work. Another feasible remedy is to spend more time with families and friends. If people arrange a specific time of the weekend to strengthen family bonds or to cement friendships, they may temporarily forget their materialistic pursuits and realize that family bonding and friendship create more lasting happiness. In these ways, I believe that people can have a balance between work and life.
In conclusion, work-life imbalance stems predominantly from the willingness to work overtime to pursue material values. However, people can tackle this problem by spending more time with their family members and friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, thus, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25641025641 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75010459427 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599358974359 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3746701835 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291063919729 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948953876949 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640733871853 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190436152257 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603421141812 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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