In some countries children have very strict rules of behavior, in other countries, they are allowed to do almost anything they want. To what extent should children have to follow rules?
It is true that rigorous regulations regarding the etiquette of children have published in an abundance of nations, while children are encouraged to make virtual things they are fond of in other states. From my perspective, these stringent rules have both great benefits and detrimental demerits.
Evidently, families and the society world reap certain benefits when it comes to using hostile regulations of behavior on children owing to these regulations not only build up a sense of responsibility but also form respectful children. As a result, they will be the prospective key of a country and in turn, mature into deferential to adults and the community. In addition, the implementation of these rules leads to shaping a stable community regardless of youngsters come from different strata, which is virtually immune from kinds of crimes related to misconduct such as humiliating behaviors and outrage. Without these rigorous rules, children would not obey their parents, teachers and hence, they would get out of hand and ignore their obligations imposed by parenthood and their society. These future citizens become indolence and irresponsibility to themselves, their family and motherland, which means they make a heavy burden to the government as well as the community where they are residing.
Otherwise, despite the vivid profits mentioned above, however, demerits of these rules should not be ignored. Initially, most of the offenders who have erroneous behaviors and wrongdoings against the interests of the community might be the consequences of excessively inflexible education methods relying on such laws. This could be demonstrated by the rising number of juvenile delinquents, especially crimes in terms of violent acts, are due to the contents of such rules applying at schools. Likewise, using these regulations which consist of inflicting corporal punishment on children in a large number of families sometimes encourages and shows them that violence is an acceptable way to deal with problems. Not to mention that making use of rigorous laws of behavior to treat children not only forms a sedentary lifestyle but also limits their creativity. That is the reason why in a number of international communities, combinations between using strict regulations of etiquette on children and letting them do something they want as long as their parents could observe them.
In conclusion, it seems to me that simultaneously the advantages of using strict rules of behavior on youngsters, its negative effects are unavoidable. Hence, the limitation its drawbacks of such rules should be taken into consideration by their parents, society and the state.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 593, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ting corporal punishment on children in a large number of families sometimes encourages and shows...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, likewise, regarding, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2257.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 415.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43855421687 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05802595106 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55421686747 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 708.3 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.0118661144 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.466666667 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6666666667 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27106909629 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872320453153 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406215322948 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173680600091 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434473083083 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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