Company's top-level authorities should get their employees in the decision-making process. Do you agree or disagree and why?
I partially agree with the topic, I believe employees should be included in the decision-making process but only to some extent. Involvement of Employees can be a right step as no one disagrees with the affirmation: "employees are the biggest assets of the company", does someone? There are many pros and cons of including operators that this essay is going to analyze in the following paragraphs.
If staff are involved in decision making it can result in business a lot of profit, though organizers are more professional and have majored in business management still workers are the better option as they have been working in the firm for many years and are familiar with the trade method and have a better insights compared to organizers furthermore, resources like money and time can be saved if workers are involved. These resources are essential as; a penny saved is a penny earned, this money can be invested into various projects which can increase the reputation of the company and can contribute to the development of it.
Like the grass is not always greener on the other side likewise there are cons when involving workers in the process of decision making for the corporation. When representatives misuse their accessibility of confidential data; disclosing of data and trading of sensitive information can cause a major loss to the organization. For instance when an employee steals valuable information of the company and sells this information to other competitive company which makes the firm vulnerable. Hence, sometimes it is a bad idea to involve them in making a judgment.
In the end, the conclusion comes out to be that employees should be included in the decision but only to some extent because the company is risking their reputation and even the existence, if workers breach the information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, likewise, so, still, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.4613686534 201% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.01324503311 299% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1373.03311258 113% => OK
No of words: 301.0 270.72406181 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14617940199 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03066887146 2.5805825403 117% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 145.348785872 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531561461794 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 419.366225166 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 21.2450331126 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.1822598963 49.2860985944 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.9 110.228320801 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1 21.698381199 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06452816374 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191167637807 0.272083759551 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832579964488 0.0996497079465 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677221431903 0.0662205650399 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127024094481 0.162205337803 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577145625799 0.0443174109184 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.3589403974 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 53.8541721854 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.0289183223 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 63.6247240618 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.7273730684 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.498013245 133% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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