The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
Summarise the information and by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the percentage of the inhabitants aged 65 and over from 1940 to now and prevision to 1940 in Japan, USA, and Sweden. The general overview here is that the proportion of people aged 65 and over in all three countries always tends to follow an upward trend.
To specify, in the USA, after a slight climb from 9% in 1940 to 10% in 1960. The rate of old people went up considerably to 15% in 1980, before a light dip to 14% in 2020. For 20 years from 2020 and 2040, the rate will increase sharply to 23%. Similarly, Sweden witnessed a gradual rise from 6.5% in 1940 to 14% i...
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