it is true that some people prefer to purchase latest designer costumes. This is because, people are influenced by advertisements and dressing sense of celebrities. In my opinion, this phenomenon has negative impact on the masses especially youth and children.
There are numerous reasons why people get attracted towards the fashionable. One of these reason is the promotion of the products with the help of advertisements in which celebrities wear branded clothes. These designer clothes catch the attention of individuals and the keen desire to buy those clothes arises in their mind. In this way, they want to look handsome like them and try to imitate the style of the television stars. for instance, it is shown in the movies that boys are wearing jeans having cuts in them and most of the college going students follow them and wear the same kind of jeans. Moreover, many people feel proud when they are superior to others. In other words, they have the desire to look different and wealthier from others and to fulfill their desire, they buy expensive clothes.
Wearing fashionable clothes can have detrimental effects on the people as it sometimes leads to spread vulgarity. Under the influence of advertisements, people wear vulgar clothes without caring about the place. youngsters follow them and get diverted from their path. instead of devoting time to their studies and making their career, they squander their time and money in purchasing branded costumes and showing off to others. This phenomenon definitely distract them from their path which they have chosen to reach their destination. To cite an example, my school friend who was very brilliant student started imitating television stars and used to wear same clothes to look like them. then she lost her interest in studies and ultimately failed in exam.
to incapisulate, it can be stated that people should make a better choice about what types clothes should they wear so that it do not have negative on them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, then, for instance, kind of, in my opinion, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1006097561 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61113587585 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57012195122 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2072929196 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9444444444 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142040204897 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486451743469 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027926347258 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887144420262 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290289312924 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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