Beautiful color can refresh the mind. The given proposal proposes that color patterns should be given importance in decoration as they play an important role in human's feelings. I tend to agree with this proposal. In this essay I will highlight the effectiveness of colors which can improve individuals overall performance and try to provide sound reasoning for my claims.
To embark on, everyone needs a colorful life. In other words, without color, which may come from various sources, people lives are meaningless. Furthermore, color can influence human minds which leads to productivity. Additionally, a peaceful mind can be helpful to reduce some health hassles. Thus, color schemes should be given proirity while designing the office as well as hospitals.
There are multifarious benefits of color patterns. First and foremost, it can increase the cognitive and creative skills. Event hough people are struggling with the work-life balance nowadays, a eye shoothing color can mitigate the the stress level which can be useful for productive work. Hence, proper color decoration in the work places can act like a stress buster. For example, people, who are doing the desk jobs, can feel more energy if they see some nature like colors such as green in their respective workplaces. Thus, color is important aspect of increasing the capacity of work.
Secondly, pleasant color can improve patient health. To be precise, if a person, who is hospitalized, is surrounded with light colors instead of loud one, the recovery rate usually speed up. For instance, according to an article published by the National Medical Team in India, people recover well when they see the happy colors around them. Therefore, color can influence human's health.
To conclude, as color plays many important roles in our lives and it's proper patterns also accepted by huge range of people, workplaces as well as hospitals should give importance while decorating there respective environments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31847133758 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72726774827 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611464968153 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.3597173407 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160084429777 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529464189246 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369379788084 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961059272686 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033181402677 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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