The draft illustrates a schematic representation of a procedure on how sea water is converted to be potable and unadulterated.
To begin, salt water proceeds to a pre-treatment filter, where it will be percolated or sifted. After that water is forced through a particular sheet at an elevated thrust. This sea water concentrate composed of contaminated substances and salt. Subsequently, as the water is pumped through this membrane at an increase pressure. The water molecules then separates from impurities and salt. After that both sea water concentrate and filter backwash flows back to the sea...
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Sentence: This is where it is stocked for later utilizatiion or usage.Finally, this uncontaminated water can now be utilized for drinking.
Error: utilizatiion Suggestion: utilization
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Attribute Value Ideal
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No. of Different Words: 93 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.517 4.0
Average Word Length: 5.098 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.985 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 35 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 21 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence Length SD: 5.478 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.591 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.081 0.07
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