Formal education tends to restrain our minds and spirits rather than set them free.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your positio
The topic raises the controversial issue of whether we learn more from the people with whom we share the same views. I concede to the speaker statement because disagreement in views can cause not only hindering the learning process but may even lead to stress. Nevertheless, difference in perspective can also lead to advance learning and one’s knowledge.
Admittedly, we can learn something good while respecting the opinion of another individual about any subject. However, disagreement in views in today’s society can even lead to personal grudges and animosity. For instance, if we look upon television debates about any social or political discussion, one group of individuals will be imposing their own views instead of listening and learning something about the other group’s stance on the subject. same goes to inhibit learning when two opponents have opposite belief of same subject but the disagreement on the subject needed for meaningful debate. For example, a partisan of communism will hardly be satisfied by the views of a supporter of capitalism.
On the other hand, a reasoned discourse and stress resulting from disagreement can bolster one’s learning as well knowledge. Assuming common ground between the two opponents about an intellectual discussion will result in advancing knowledge, whether at personal level or community level. For example, teenagers can learn from parents and teacher’s critical analysis of their homework. At the same time, parents will get the awareness about juvenile problems and their interest in daily life games.
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- Formal education tends to restrain our minds and spirits rather than set them free.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and s 16
- We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from people whose views contradict our own; disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning 33
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'watch'?
Suggestion: watch
...ges and animosity. For instance, if we look upon television debates about any socia...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Same
...her group's stance on the subject. same goes to inhibit learning when two oppon...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iews of a supporter of capitalism. On the other hand, a reasoned discourse ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, well, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 19.5258426966 10% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 33.0505617978 24% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 244.0 442.535393258 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5737704918 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98424826463 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 215.323595506 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598360655738 0.4932671777 121% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 704.065955056 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6312867428 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.333333333 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 5.21951772744 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.030885993192 0.243740707755 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0130768028214 0.0831039109588 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00962433087926 0.0758088955206 13% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0229906694246 0.150359130593 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00253999511791 0.0667264976115 4% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.1639044944 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.