You have invited some friends to come on holiday. You are going to the airport to meet them. They have asked you how to get to your house from the airport.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter
• Explain that you will meet them at the airport
• Give them some idea of what you have planned for them
• Tell them some important things that they might find useful
Dear friends,
How are you ?Hope you are in pink of your health.I am exhilarated that you people accepted my invitation to spend your holiday in my place.
Let me tell you that this vacation would be thrilling to both of you.
Girls, yo needn't worry about how to get to my house , I will be at the airport to pick you up.Besides that I have arranged your stay with my family .
moreover, I have planned a four-day trip to Mumbai and our itinerary covers Goa, bangalore and Hydrabad. Our destination will be 'Taj Mahal'.
I know you people are excited to visit this monument. In addition , before you leave the place we would be celebrating Christmas.
I am sure that you would enjoy this holiday trip.
Apart from that, I wanted to tell you some things that would benefit you both during the holiday.As you are coming in the month ode December , you should carry some warm clothes to withstand with the cold weather.
Don't forget to take medicines if any, because here you would not get any medicine without prescription.
Looking forward to meet you soon.
Warm wishes,
Name
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hope
Dear friends, How are you ?Hope you are in pink of your health.I am exh...
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Line 5, column 50, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ou ?Hope you are in pink of your health.I am exhilarated that you people accepted...
^
Line 15, column 11, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: needn't
...ng to both of you. Girls, yo neednt worry about how to get to my house , I ...
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Line 15, column 52, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...eednt worry about how to get to my house , I will be at the airport to pick you up...
^^
Line 15, column 95, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Besides
...I will be at the airport to pick you up.Besides that I have arranged your stay with my ...
^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 148, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...I have arranged your stay with my family . moreover, I have planned a four-day t...
^^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...e arranged your stay with my family . moreover, I have planned a four-day trip to Mumb...
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Line 17, column 91, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and our itinerary covers Goa, bangalore and Hydrabad. Our destination will be Ta...
^^
Line 19, column 66, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ited to visit this monument. In addition , before you leave the place we would be ...
^^
Line 25, column 98, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...uld benefit you both during the holiday.As you are coming in the month ode Decembe...
^^
Line 25, column 141, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...you are coming in the month ode December , you should carry some warm clothes to w...
^^
Line 27, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
...s to withstand with the cold weather. Dont forget to take medicines if any, becaus...
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Line 31, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
...hout prescription. Looking forward to meet you soon. Warm wishes, Name ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, moreover, so, apart from, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87958115183 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42463794514 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638743455497 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8159797553 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6666666667 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9166666667 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421272153356 0.216113520407 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138909601866 0.0766984524023 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0993401180004 0.0603063233224 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175649787057 0.12726935374 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863055456242 0.0580467560999 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.