Some psychologists recommend that to overcome stresses in daily life we should do nothing at all for a period of time of the day. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, hectic working hours have created the problem of persistent tense minds. In order to cure it, some specialists advise that one should take a short break from the tight life schedule on a daily basis. In my opinion, I completely agree with this method of overcoming stress as it could provide an opportunity for people to re-energize themselves.
To embark on, the time slot for no activity in a day would relax the mind and body. It is universally acknowledged that the human body is like a machine, if it continues to work for long hours then it may suffer from various issues such as fatigue, tiredness and unnecessary pressure on the brain. Thus, putting our brains and bodies on rest for some period of time daily would aid to recharge and get rid of worries. Consequently, we would be able to concentrate more effectively and can achieve better results.
Moreover, one could review or analyze his/her running circumstances more closely and could take decisions accordingly. Most of the time, decisions that are taken in a hurry without thinking could have negative impacts. Therefore, it becomes necessary to take a pause from a busy lifestyle in order to be decisive appropriately. For instance, it is scientifically proved that our nervous system acts strongly when we are in the resting phase and this stage is the best time to think deeply for an issue.
In conclusion, it is evident that anxiety can be cured or avoided by taking short breaks from continuous work regularly. I consider it as a natural healing therapy for our stressed-out minds.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 352, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... our brains and bodies on rest for some period of time daily would aid to recharge and get rid...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, consequently, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97744360902 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82902917475 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9760123603 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.846153846 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173664105073 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561560491953 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505893804171 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968804540781 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430797591991 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.