some people feel that children should be educated in single sex school. others argue that mixed schools are better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, it is a known fact that schools play an important role in shaping the future of every individual. Also, education is fundamental right of all citizens. Many people prefer to send their child tp unisex school. While others believe that co ed schools are better as compared to single sex schools. In my opinion, former is better for overall development of a child. This essay aims at discussing both views in subsequent paragraphs.
First of all, unisex schools and colleges give an opportunity to study to students from rural and backward society. To cite an example, in villages people do not allow their girl child to go to school and study along with boys because of narrow minding thinking and religious restrictions. so, girls in the villages get a chance to study because of this approach. on the other hand, this lead to underdevelopment of children as compared to the students of mixed school. These kids lack confidence to talk to their opposite gender people which will be a great hindrance in future to get a job and other opportunity.
on the other side of the coin, many people believe mixed schools are better for various reasons. Initially, these schools give chance to students to explore and learn from others and built their confidence in a better way. For example, a study was conducted on both type of schools and it was found that children from co ed schools performed better as compared to students from single sex schools. Above all, these schools are good example of gender equality, where every child whether girl or boy is treated equally. so, these schools help in removing the gender based discrimination.
In conclusion, having considered all the points elaborated above it can stated that schools play an important role in educating and making future bright. students can be enrolled either in single sex school or mixed school, based on the preference.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, while, for example, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9625 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65588232749 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503125 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2916433892 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2222222222 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383229159969 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123480749229 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774399529291 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24652376318 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050250115649 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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