Dear Mr. Smith,
I was recruited by your company last month and my joining date is within 2 days. I am writing this letter to inform you that unfortunately, I won't be able to join due to some critical family health issues.
My father is not keeping well from the past few months and is recently got diagnosed with a major heart problem. I am my parent's only child to look after them. So, I have to take him for checkups and proper treatment. I just can't ignore my responsibility to be with them in such need. Also, the main problem is , that, we don't have any relatives around who can see my parents in the need of emergency. Hence, all they have is me.
It is my word to you that I will join within a period of 10 days to the maximum. And, I promise, I won't let my work and your organization suffer because of my absence and that you will see in my dedication towards my job. Please let me know if that can be possible.
I hope that you will understand my circumstances and I am looking forward to hear a supportive reply from you.
Thanking you,
Yours Sincerely,
Nupur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Smith, I was recruited by your company last mon...
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Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...letter to inform you that unfortunately, I wont be able to join due to some criti...
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Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...r checkups and proper treatment. I just cant ignore my responsibility to be with the...
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Line 5, column 311, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... in such need. Also, the main problem is , that, we dont have any relatives around...
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Line 5, column 323, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...d. Also, the main problem is , that, we dont have any relatives around who can see m...
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Line 9, column 75, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
... circumstances and I am looking forward to hear a supportive reply from you. Thank...
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Line 9, column 112, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rd to hear a supportive reply from you. Thanking you, Yours Sincerely, Nupur...
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Line 11, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rtive reply from you. Thanking you, Yours Sincerely, Nupur
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Line 12, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u. Thanking you, Yours Sincerely, Nupur
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...king you, Yours Sincerely, Nupur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 5.60731707317 803% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34146341463 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5253171846 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653658536585 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 1.53170731707 849% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0200470153 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.4615384615 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7692307692 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263036431822 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956470998511 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892777173486 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160639690491 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645462588307 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 13.2329268293 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 11.4140731707 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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