You recently completed a course in college and liked the lessons given by a particular teacher. Write a letter him/her and introduce yourself. When and where did you take the course? Why did you like those lessons?
Dear Mr.Jack,
I am one of your students at the computer science previous course at California college last month from 1st of November to 28th. I am writing to thank you for this course, it really changed my life. I am working in a famous company at the I.T department and i felt behind as I was not very good at computer;however, after your course I got promoted and I am the first who got this position in a very young age as me. Moreover, I got a salary raise and I really needed that raise. I absolutely liked those lessons as it was not expensive and it was short and highlighting the important information in a simple way. Now I am recommending this course to my work colleagues. I can not wait to be a member of your next course to complete your book. Therefore, I am aiming to find a chair for me as I know how hard it is to find a room in your courses.
yours faithfully
Safaa Hussein
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| 2019-11-22 | Ahmed karem Mahmoud Ahmed | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Jack
Dear Mr.Jack, I am one of your students at the co...
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Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr.Jack, I am one of your students at the compute...
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Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...this course, it really changed my life. I am working in a famous company at the I...
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Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: T
...am working in a famous company at the I.T department and i felt behind as I was n...
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Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...amous company at the I.T department and i felt behind as I was not very good at c...
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Line 3, column 599, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a simple way" with adverb for "simple"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... highlighting the important information in a simple way. Now I am recommending this course to m...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...s to find a room in your courses. yours faithfully Safaa Hussein
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Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in your courses. yours faithfully Safaa Hussein
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, really, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 734.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24277456647 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75049772392 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589595375723 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7699718853 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5555555556 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118639372832 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474033973574 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415110052056 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123468836455 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.