At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large no. of young adults compared with the no. of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Many countries have large number population of youngsters. Some people believe that it is advantageous but according to others there should be mix ratio of old and young individuals. This essay will analyzed both sides of the arguments before arriving a reasoned conclusion.
On the one hand, there are certainly several benefits to have young people in the population. They are more productive than older ones. Young peoples are more healthier and need spend less money on healthcare. It leads them to more work and maintain them to more active. Hence, industries have no difficulties to for finding such talents. For instance, in India there is no scarcity of skilled and educated young individuals. Therefore companies operating in the country never face the shortage of young skilled workers. The other advantage of having large population of young ones has ability to bring necessary change in the nation and change their attitude as per need. Youngsters always challenge old style of thinking. It helps the country grow and gain the acceptance on the global stage.
On the other hand, having more young individuals leads to lack of professional in the society. The old persons are more educated and they had given more time in professional studies. To exemplify a specialist physician needed at least 10 years of University study and gain further experience related with job then he considered as a successful professional. In addition young adults have less experience of life as compare to old ones. In the age of 50’s may have been lot in life and they are more prepared for day to day problems which leads to less stressful society. Lastly, young people are more oriented to crime. They have more energy to commit crime. To illustrate, a survey conducted by University of Chile in which people living in south chile commit more crime and rob as compare to north chile where people are of old age or in 50,s.
To conclude, when we look at the positive changes can bring by youngsters it is not hard to see the advantageous of young people overweigh the disadvantages. Even though, there are some positive aspects of having an older population that we should consider.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, lastly, look, may, so, then, therefore, at least, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1837.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01912568306 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72822245545 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527322404372 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5670820029 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8695652174 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9130434783 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78260869565 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188126418992 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541799614266 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391811109275 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122063233672 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02994586762 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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