Society should identify those children who have special talents and provide training for them at an early age to develop their talents.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The future of any country depends upon its citizens. Few children are born with gifted talents. Society plays an important role on a children. Any child learns quite a lot of things from the society. The prompt says that children who have special talents should be identified by the society and should give them regarding training to develop their talents. I strongly agree with the prompt for two reasons.
Many children exhibit special talents in their childhood. Few might be good at dancing while some other may be good at somethging else. The very important thing is how well we noticed their talents. we should encourage children by identifying their talents at the early ages and provide them necessary training in order to make their talents as a future goal. For example,The well know cricketer Sachin Tendulkar was not good at studies. He was forced to go to school by parents but never excelled in studies. Once his physical techear saw him playing cricket with his friends. He belived that he has got some special talent. He started giving training to that little boy and today the entire world knows him for cricket. The above example stated that the If we can identify childrens ability and potential they can excel in their career.
Further, today's Society thinks that every child should go to the school, excel in studies, need to score good marks and finally end up being a doctor or engineer. They do not value for thier children's intrests. Suppose a think that a girl likes horse riding and she end up being a software engineer because his parents doesn't want her to become a horse rider. Furthermore Software engineers earn good salary. She might become a software engineer but she can not excel in programing because that is not her intrest. She hazardly may programe but she is not satisfied with her work.However lack of intrest can leads to less efficient in work which interms leads to effect the countries economy.
However some people argues that children do not have any idea about their career path and they end up being a failure if they followed their talents. But is can they gaurentee that ? If Michel Jackson was forced to go to school could he have become a worlds famous celebrity?If Robert junior was not enchouraged for his talent would he have become a highest paid actor? No, Therefore childrens must be encouraged with their talents to make their career.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
...nts. Society plays an important role on a children. Any child learns quite a lot of things...
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Line 1, column 332, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'developing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: developing
...and should give them regarding training to develop their talents. I strongly agree with th...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e with the prompt for two reasons. Many children exhibit special talents in...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun might seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'little might'.
Suggestion: Little might
...bit special talents in their childhood. Few might be good at dancing while some other may...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...g is how well we noticed their talents. we should encourage children by identifyin...
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Suggestion: , The
...ir talents as a future goal. For example,The well know cricketer Sachin Tendulkar wa...
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Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... parents but never excelled in studies. Once his physical techear saw him playing cr...
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...e for thier childrens intrests. Suppose a think that a girl likes horse riding and she ...
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'ends'.
Suggestion: ends
... that a girl likes horse riding and she end up being a software engineer because hi...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...a software engineer because his parents doesnt want her to become a horse rider. Furth...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...oesnt want her to become a horse rider. Furthermore Software engineers earn good salary. Sh...
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Suggestion: However
... but she is not satisfied with her work.However lack of intrest can leads to less effic...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... but she is not satisfied with her work.However lack of intrest can leads to less effic...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...th her work.However lack of intrest can leads to less efficient in work which interms...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
... work which interms leads to effect the countries economy. However some people argue...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...s to effect the countries economy. However some people argues that children do not...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'canned'.
Suggestion: canned
... if they followed their talents. But is can they gaurentee that ? If Michel Jackson...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a world' or simply 'worlds'?
Suggestion: a world; worlds
...ed to go to school could he have become a worlds famous celebrity?If Robert junior was n...
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Message: Use simply 'celebrity'.
Suggestion: celebrity
...to school could he have become a worlds famous celebrity?If Robert junior was not enchouraged fo...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...e have become a worlds famous celebrity?If Robert junior was not enchouraged for h...
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ged for his talent would he have become a highest paid actor? No, Therefore child...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, as for, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 12.9106741573 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1998.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 412.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84951456311 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3891938185 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538834951456 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.8237797056 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8461538462 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8461538462 23.4991977007 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.96153846154 5.21951772744 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26763557073 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734001580008 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839511473215 0.0758088955206 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171599653117 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091144372312 0.0667264976115 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 11.8971910112 38% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.