With the pressure on today's young people to succeed academically, some people believe that no academic subjects at school should be remove from syllabus so that children can concentrate wholly on academic subjects.
To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Nowadays, the society is demanding more and more young people to be successful in the academic fields. Some people claim that schools should eliminate all non-academic subjects in order to give children a full concentration on academic subjects. In my opinion, I totally disagree with this idea.
Admittedly, it is undeniable that when non-academic subjects have been gone, students will spend more time on learning academic subject. Therefore, they will achieve a better result in these subjects to attend easily a well-known university or college, which enable them to succeed in the future. Iron...
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the society is demanding more and more young people
the society is demanding more and more on young people
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