Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the busy and crowded world today, we should not expect people to be polite to each other.
The interaction between individuals has evolved throughout the history and changed based on the different situations. Although nowadays life is pretty hectic for everyone, it is not a good enough excuse to be impolite to one another. I hold preserving values, causing stress, and spreading unreliability as three main reasons for my opinion which I am going to elaborate on in the following paragraphs.
First of all, by not being polite to each other, we are disrespecting human values. We as humans have lots of abilities and characteristics to be proud of and no matter what the situation is, we are not allowed to disrespect each other. For example, in my country, old people are known to be prior to younger ones and as a sign of respect a teenager might offer their seat to an old person entering the bus but if we start being impolite to each other no one will continue to do so.
On the other hand, being disrespectful to one another, we cause more stress and problem in each other lives than already exists. It goes without saying that life has turned to be more stressful an difficult for everyone by the introduction of new technologies. Therefor, not only should we stand by and look after each other in this chaotic era, but also we should lessen the stress by respecting and being polite to each other.
Finally, spreading unreliability is another result of being impolite. However, there are a lot other factors contributing to the unreliability, impoliteness is one of the most important one. We tent to trust people who respects us more than the ones who are disrespectful because we figure that if they are respecting us as human beings, then they must be a respectful and reliable person themselves. So the busy and crowded world is not the best excuse for being impolite.
To sum up, politeness is one of the most important factors of human beings and the absence of it can lead to lots of problems. I believe so for three main reasons. Preserving values, causing more stress for each other, and spreading unreliability are the main reasons I hold for my opinion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 195, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...at life has turned to be more stressful an difficult for everyone by the introduct...
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Line 13, column 431, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hemselves. So the busy and crowded world is not the best excuse for being impolit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, look, so, then, for example, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8044077135 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83598613442 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512396694215 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8028896201 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6875 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264077494345 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944379859114 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817009542676 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148379753244 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0835565345209 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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