In the modern world, everyone wants to live a lavish life and to fulfill their dreams; they spend most of their time working. This type of lifestyle and lack of time lead them to the things are easily available and disposable. With the inception of plastic, ‘Use and Throw’ items are being produced nowadays at an alarming rate. As most of the throwaway items are made of plastic, they are affecting the overall health of Planet Earth detrimentally. This essay will evaluate the reasons and issues that are being generated because of this.
Firstly, nowadays almost everything such as milk, soft drinks, and water, etc are available in disposable bags and can be purchased very conveniently universally. With this type of packing they can be taken anywhere without any worries. Another factor to consider for the growing popularity of such items is their low manufacturing cost compare to the things made of metal and other materials. However, problems arise when people start to take this facility for granted and start throwing the packing here and there without giving much of the thought.
Next, it is true that most of the throwaway things are manufactured by plastic but plastic cannot be blamed for the deteriorating atmosphere but only the irresponsible users. As per research conducted by RHL University, almost 210 tons of plastic garbage is thrown away daily and around 200 tons of this garbage come out of the throwaway items. Apart from this, only 20% of this plastic garbage gets recycled, which means around 160 tons of it stays scattered on the surface of the planet for another 300 years and keeps polluting natural resources.
In essence, the importance of throwaway items cannot be neglected. However, it is people's responsibility to use them in a responsible manner and to dispose them off at the proper place, so that they could be recycled. Moreover, the responsibility to spread awareness among people lies with the government as most of the people in many developing countries don’t know the impacts of their doings.
- Some people believe that if people are allowed to work after the age of 60, it causes problems. Do you agree or disagree? 84
- In some countries, there are many social problems involving teenagers. Some people say this is because parents spend much time at work and not at home. Do you agree or disagree? 89
- Computer technologies are more accessible and cheaper, as the result, more adults’ work at home and children study at home. Is this a positive or negative development? 67
- In many countries, shops are open long hours every day of the week. Discuss the positive or negative effect on the shopper and the local community. 11
- In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 118, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a responsible manner" with adverb for "responsible"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...t is peoples responsibility to use them in a responsible manner and to dispose them off at the proper p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, apart from, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07941176471 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72488690601 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564705882353 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3003170652 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.133333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164338817172 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496627324135 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527752017625 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0958981582691 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480697036114 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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