When old buildings stand on ground that modern planners feel could be better used for modern purposes, modern development should be given precedence over the preservation of historic buildings
Everyday the things getting better over another. This changes became part of our life; As any person found something better than older thing , they eventually try to replace the old thing with the new one. Similarly the construction of buildings becoming betterment over another. As they reconstruct the old buildings to the new one, it will hold many advantages than previous one. I personally agree with the statement for a couple of reasons.
First of all, replacing the old building with modern construction can provide more spacious. The new construction have variety of ideas to make more the buildings more comfort to the people who holds the property. For example, If a land consist of a single house with large land area can be renovate into modern apartment. This apartment construction offers many compact houses. In this decade, the increase in population results the people for requirement of individual houses. By that need for people, the owner of land can make some money by satisfying people need. The above stated example clearly shows 'How the new construction is benefit to the people . It shows the achievement of floor space by modern construction.
Secondly, The older buildings became dangerous as days passing by. As days increasing the level of danger increase proportionally. For instance, consider the building with older construction. The building gets weaker as it became older. This may result in destruction when some minor natural disaster occurs. moreover the tall buildings not only affects the people in it but also the buildings near to it. So we can not risk our life in the saving of older construction. This example states why the new construction is better than the old one.
In conclusion, Many older buildings and monuments need to be protected. However, The replacement of old one with new one is the better and safer. It is because of the above stated reasons.
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Suggestion: Similarly,
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...property. For example, If a land consist of a single house with large land area c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 315.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06031746032 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79589604605 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51746031746 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8423371406 60.3974514979 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.4166666667 118.986275619 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.125 23.4991977007 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.21951772744 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215312595078 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064425278852 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525883439896 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132574920235 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0150660112423 0.0667264976115 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 48.8420337079 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.18 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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